Analysis of ~A Journey to Dream ~

Lynda m cardone 1958 (Danvers)



Begin again, another year
adventures of longing hearts
a smile,
a touch,
a word ,
a tear ~
with these, our journey starts.
I dream you when I'm wide awake.....
asleep ~ you're here with me.
I long for ~
you ~
the love ~
we make ~
you're my true love, ~ my fantasy.
Our future is a dream away
I hold it safe within my heart ~
Forever will I
love you ~
stay ~
til the day we're ne'er apart.
Hold onto faith in our tomorrows,
let in no dispair~
your fears ~
your cares ~
frustrations ~
sorrows ~
let me in to share .
I love you ! hear my sighs resound
hold me closer still~
devoted ~
sure ~
destined ~
bound ~
for you, my desire ~ for you, my will.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01010101 0101101 01 01 01 01 1110101 11111101 011111 111 1 01 11 11111100 101010101 11110111 01011 11 1 1011101 110101001 10101 11 11 010 10 11011 1111111 11101 010 1 10 1 1110101111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 645
Words 135
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 34
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 461
Words per stanza (avg) 138

About this poem

I wrote this when I felt so deeply that someone was out there in the world for me. But I was feeling stuck in a very sad place.

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Written on May 18, 2006

Submitted by Lynda on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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