Analysis of Inner Me

SoHurt Ronnie 1989 (North Carolina)



Do you see me?
I mean the real me?
If I strip down to just the bare,
Would you still like what you see?
Would you still find excitement in your pants?
I mean can you get past the intimate details?
The flesh that you see?
The curve in my hips?
The curl of my lips?
I mean the curl in my hair?
I mean the ass that you swear I have...
Can you let me into your mind?
I mean ill let you in to mines...
I mean I know you see the outer me....
That is what makes you so aroused!
I want you to get enticed by my word.
I want them to feed your inner soul
I want you to see the inner me
I mean I want you in me.
No I mean I want you to see the inner me


Scheme AABACDAEEBFGHAIJKAAA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1111 11011 11111101 1111111 1111010011 111111010001 01111 01011 01111 1101011 110111111 11110111 11111011 1111110101 11111101 1111101111 111111101 111110101 1111101 111111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 627
Words 146
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 472
Words per stanza (avg) 146
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Written on September 21, 2021

Submitted by veronicacaldwell11 on September 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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