Analysis of September drizzle



The light September drizzle knows no bounds to cease..
It Comes n goes light lofty drizzles pattering on my windows
I gaze at yonder ,at d dark gloomy skies....
No birds fly...no squirrels shutters by..
all enjoying d sleepy weather
In their nests huddled together cozily babies n mum....
Hoping lik Al of us when will this rain cease .....
Hoping n wishing for a bright morn tomorrow....
Just like us in d midst of this rain as it cascades down my face ...
It's cool waters running down
melting away all my pain n anguishes....of hurt,n tears of unknown sorrow.
Of life wat it,d been...wat it is...wat lies ahead!!!
I know not from where?dis pain rises in my heart....
Of wat ....I can't find....lik d lone wolf I travel in d crowd bt alone ...alone in my thoughts
Wishing where....time has stood still fr me n emotions rise endlessly like dis Endless drizzle.
O heart tell me why are you so gloomy like d skies above.....
It,ll pass I know n d sun will peep through ending dis darkness.....


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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 977
Words 188
Sentences 22
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 735
Words per stanza (avg) 180

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Rain n emotions attached to it

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Submitted by Monalisaliz on September 21, 2021

Modified on April 11, 2023

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