Analysis of WHITE LOTUS



If I could be a flower,
what flower could I be?
A red rose with a sharp thorn,
or the holy lily of the valley,
or a yellow dandelion on a lawn?

Maybe I would just let me be
a white lotus as I should be.
I would keep my upright head,
my wide leave spread,
floating above the mirky mud
witnessing His wisdom and
blessing His redeeming blood.


Scheme XAXAX AABBCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 1111010 110111 0111011 1010101010 1010100101 10111111 01101111 1111011 1111 1001011 1001100 1010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 329
Words 69
Sentences 4
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 7
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 35

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Written on August 06, 2021

Submitted by Ratri on September 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ratri Kumudawati

Used to live in Indonesia and UK. Now in Australia. Field of study: Humanity. Has been writing verses off and on since teenager. Profession: Translator from Indonesian to English v.v. more…

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