Analysis of A SONG



If only I could make you a song,
If only I can put the words that won’t make it wrong
If I could only think of something
To keep you away from drifting

If only I could dedicated a song
If only I can change its words to make it strong
I wouldn’t be standing here thinking of something
To keep you away from drifting

If only I could sing you a song
If only I could keep it up and make it long
I wouldn’t be sitting here composing something
To keep you away from drifting

If only you loved me like that song
If only I wasn’t that wrong
I wouldn’t be here thinking of you
I wouldn’t be suppressing the words “I Love You”


Scheme aabB aabB aabB aacc
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110111101 1101110111111 111101110 11101110 11011100001 110111111111 11110110110 11101110 110111101 110111110111 11110101010 11101110 110111111 1101111 11111011 11101001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 617
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

A poem dedicated to woman who's about to leave

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Submitted by JayTaw15 on September 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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