Analysis of Two White Shirts.



How much do you deserve the gift:
The one which made you;
The jolt and twist
that turned inside you
Into you and much more beyond you?

Children fearless of its texture
Smear there white floors
One permanent, the other
Slipping atop the first.
The smell neglected but not shy

Confident the nail grow in, even,
Shadings of the sun.
Scratching the earth collecting it
Homeward to keep.


Scheme XAXAA BXBXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 01111 0101 11011 011011011 10101110 1111 1100010 100101 01010111 100011010 10101 10010101 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 370
Words 68
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This poem is about the never lost archaic nature through childhood and adulthood then through to the beyond and back to our ancestral roots turning in full halo.

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Written on September 07, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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