Analysis of What Is It You Demand Payment For?

Meshack Bwoyele Keya 1960 (Vihiga)



Sickness strikes unceremoniously.

Bedridden arises seriously.

Treatment is urgently sought.

To the hospital the sick is brought.

Main aim is to seek wellbeing.

And whole to make the ailing being.

What is it you demand  payment for?

If my sick succumbs before.

The medics tried their best.

Unique medicine put to test.

Best doctors offered their expertise.

The sick person the best not miss.

They struggled with entegrity.

Yet the sick had the teeth so gritty.

What is it you demand payment for?

If my sick succumbed before.

My sick passed on in the quest.

Though a big Bill on the table rest.

"Pay before the body do release."

The doctors ordered without a tease.

To bury is what I do need.

Your medicine never germinated a seed.

What is it you demand payment for?

If my sick succumbed before.


Scheme a a b b c c d d e e f x b a D D e e x f g g D D
Poetic Form
Metre 10101000 100101000 1011001 10100111 1111110 011101010 111101101 1110101 010111 01100111 11010101 01100111 11011 101101110 111101101 1110101 1111001 101110101 101010101 010100101 11011111 11001010001 111101101 1110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 783
Words 142
Sentences 24
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

The aim of taking the sick to hospital is to help them get well. If they do not react to the medicine and pass on then what do the doctors demand payment for?

Font size:
 

Submitted by baby_p on September 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

42 sec read
21

Discuss this Meshack Bwoyele Keya poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "What Is It You Demand Payment For?" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 10 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/108671/what-is-it-you-demand-payment-for%3F>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    21
    days
    18
    hours
    44
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem One Art?
    A Elizabeth Bishop
    B Elizabeth Barrett Browning
    C Sylvia Plath
    D E. E. Cummings