Analysis of Smile For Me



Smile for me for now I am at peace
Don't shed a tear of sorrow although your hearts will miss me
I know it seems our time together was cut to short
But even though I'm not physically here know I left each of you a piece of my heart
We  knew this day and time would come as this is a journey we all must take
But know even in the midst of it all I smile knowing I had each of you along the way

Smile for me because I cry for you
I am now free from the pain I was going  through
We shared many years of laughter and sometimes pain
But know i loved every moment even the ones I couldn't change

Smile for me for my heart no longer aches
I know you will miss me but let our memories fill that empty space

Smile for me because I smile for you
God gave me time to create life and enjoy moments like loving you
I know this isn't the way you wanted things to go
and I to struggled to let go
God had a bigger plan and needed me more
I'll save a seat for each of and I'll greet you at heaven door

Smile for me my love ones and my friends
I now got my wings but that doesn't mean this is the end

Smile for me!


Scheme XAXXXX BBXX XX BBCCDD XX A
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 1101110111111 11111010101111 1101111000111111101111 111101111110101111 11100011111110111110101 111011111 111110111101 111011100011 11111001010011101 1111111101 111111111010011101 111011111 11111011001101101 1111001110111 01110111 11010101011 110111101111101 111111011 11111111011101 111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,092
Words 237
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 2, 6, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 142
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

This is a poem dedicated to my grandmother that I lost this year 2021. Rest in paradise

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Written on June 12, 2021

Submitted by Shae1 on September 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Danyettia Crawford

IN MY POEMS I usually do not share my poems because they are sacred to me It is the place of no judgement where my feelings can be released In my poems is the best part of me This has been my outlet of things that has now set me free In poem is some of the greatest challenges I have faced But also, of the experiences that molded me into the woman I am today I have experienced a lot of joy but pain too Held myself responsible even for the things I never knew I grew into poems and them into me My heart is exposed through each word you read I allow vulnerability because the same poems I write are the same ones that saved me Heartbreak and lost I have endured it all Learned how to trust God and always stand tall Mistakes I made taught me the best In poems I surrendered my stress Depression hit like being overtaken by a wave But through my poems unbroken I stayed I am a book many dare not to read Mislead by the thought of knowing me In my poems is my reality often altered with some fantasy I am just me and I give my all So, as you read my poems, I hope I can make you smile more…

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