Analysis of Crossed limits



Let me tell you.
I became fucking fearless.

But i'm terrified of what I'm capable of, cause all the limits I set for myself I already crossed.

Not afraid to die, it's being alive that's so scary right now.

The sun is shining bright,
my eyes are blinded by the UV-light.

But than rain and clouds they come to intrude without an invite.

I can only see black or white, I've never seen grey even though I pray for it at night.

Well it might be that I'm drowning but this is for any motherfucker who has the guts to cross my line.

Cause I will become the ocean, I'll be the tsunami wrecking everything you own.

And don't you think that I'm blind, for I am the one that sees through everything little detail that other people will never find.


Scheme XX X X AA A A X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1011010 1110111100111010111110101 1011111001111011 011101 111101011 111011110101101 1110111111011101111111 11111110111110101011011111 11101010110010101011 011111111101111101001110101101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 726
Words 141
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

The poem is about how the struggles in life can change a person, you it can make someone fearless of what other people are terrified of.

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Written on September 01, 2021

Submitted by lunatunie on August 31, 2021

Modified on March 19, 2023

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Luna deschacht

I'm a 25year old girl with a passion for writing. I always felt the need to make people feel that no matter how hard and how long the road seems to be, they're never truly alone. Like many I've seen and been through a lot in my young life. I went to art school so painting and drawing is also a way to express myself. I'm also a singer songwriter. But I recently discovered that spoken word is my true passion. I have a huge passion for animals and my dog is the most important thing in my life. I hope you'll enjoy my poetry! Love, Luna more…

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