Analysis of Heartbroken



The update on my life is quite sad,
Now I have 8 letters I won't hear back,
Taking sedatives to clear my mind up,
Feeling addicted to them already, fuck ,
Cannot process any breakups at all,
I'm trying to remember all the words,
All the words you told me before ,
Guess you just got bored,
Bored of my actions ,
But now I really need a distraction ,
To get my mind off of this interaction ,
To get a bit of satisfaction,
How does it feel to break hearts that are patched?
I guess I just got too attached
Too attached to your beautiful face
To your great persona
I won't even forget these 6 months in order,
In order to at least remember how is it like to feel loved,
I still wanna get involved 
Involved in your life Involved in your mind,
Because If not the promise we made is gonna be undermined,
I wonder when you lost them,
I wonder what I did wrong,
I know that it's better for you,
But for me it just won't do,
Because I want to see someone in the morning,
And im fucking tired of hurting.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJJJKKLMNOPQQRSTTUU
Poetic Form
Metre 001111111 111101111 10111111 10010110101 101101011 1101010101 10111101 11111 11110 1111010010 1111111010 11011010 1111111111 11111101 101111001 111010 11100111010 0101110101111111 1110101 0101101011 011101011110101 1101111 1101111 11111011 1111111 01111110010 011010110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 974
Words 194
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 767
Words per stanza (avg) 199

About this poem

Well, I made this poem while I was on emotions when my girlfriend broke up with me and started being really cold towards me ,I'm still trying to hold on ,still trying to be motivated but it's just not working in my favor and I feel like actually dying inside and not wanting to do anything ,so I thought "hey ill make a poem and I'll feel better". I don't feel better.

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Written on August 26, 2021

Submitted on August 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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