Analysis of SWIFT, THE RILLS



swift, swift, the rills do run
swift, from high the mountain
swifter, tho', the running years
flowing through life's fountain

creep, creep, the brumal mists
creep 'midst fells and highlands
creeping 'round the peaks and years
mem'ries drowned like islands

drift, drift, my dreams to sea
drift, like thought and feather
drifting toward a mortal bloom
thick with highland heather

sleep, sleep, at last to dream
sleep, bides blessed and meek
sleep, come press a kiss goodbye...
so sweet, now... 'pon my cheek.


Scheme AABA XCBC XDXD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 110111 111010 1010101 101110 11011 111010 1010101 11110 111111 111010 10010101 111010 111111 11101 111011 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 491
Words 83
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This is a sister poem to my classic rhyme “Soft, The Bells”, written in a similar vein and style, about life and mortality.

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Written on July 17, 2021

Submitted by Bahku on August 24, 2021

Modified by Bahku on August 24, 2021

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