Analysis of with you
I was with you to end
I stood by you all the way
on my time on your time
even when I was away
I never looked down on you
or made you feel out of place
you broke my heart in so many places
so many pieces you tore apart
but, I look the other way
because you had my heart
you made me feel good that day
I felt special in every part
on good days you would sometimes hold my hand
on bad days you would make cry
I never understood why you did me the way you did
but, I prayed to God so that
I will forgive you
for acting like a kid for being irresponsible
and treating me like ****
You actually did me a favor because it
help me to growth into the person that I
needed to be in order to become spiritually
and I Thank you because that's the day I woke up
in peace made me feel like I was in heaven and everything begin all over for me a second chance that
God gave me and now I'm not in sorrow for tomorrow
im in peace and Joy and love and I will be like this for
a lifetime as follow I'm a beautiful soul and everything happens within for the goodness of me
Scheme | ABCBDEFGBGBGHIJKDLMNIOPKQRO |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 1111101 111111 1011101 1101111 1111111 1111011010 110101101 1110101 011111 1111111 111001001 1111101111 1111111 1100111110111 1111111 11011 11010111000100 01011 110011010011 11110101011 101101010110000 011101101111 01111111010010011101101011 1110111010101 10101010111111 011101010010101001101011 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,038 |
Words | 225 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 27 |
Lines Amount | 27 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 819 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 225 |
About this poem
a little personal and emotional
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Written on August 22, 2021
Submitted by Ke'Millinnieum36 on August 22, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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