Analysis of with you



I was with you to end
I stood by you all the way
on my time on your time
even when I was away
I never looked down on you
or made you feel out of place
you broke my heart in so many places
so many pieces you tore apart
but, I look the other way
because you had my heart
you made me feel good that day
I felt special in every part
on good days you would sometimes hold my hand
on bad days you would make cry
I never understood why you did me the way you did
but, I prayed to God so that
 I will forgive you
for acting like a kid for being irresponsible
and treating me like ****
You actually did me a favor because it
help me to growth into the person that I
needed to be in order to become spiritually
and I Thank you because that's the day I woke up
in peace made me feel like I was in heaven and everything begin all over for me a second chance that
God gave me and now I'm not in sorrow for tomorrow
im in peace and Joy and love and I will be like this for
a lifetime as follow I'm a beautiful soul and everything happens within for the goodness of me


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111101 111111 1011101 1101111 1111111 1111011010 110101101 1110101 011111 1111111 111001001 1111101111 1111111 1100111110111 1111111 11011 11010111000100 01011 110011010011 11110101011 101101010110000 011101101111 01111111010010011101101011 1110111010101 10101010111111 011101010010101001101011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,038
Words 225
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 819
Words per stanza (avg) 225

About this poem

a little personal and emotional

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Written on August 22, 2021

Submitted by Ke'Millinnieum36 on August 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:08 min read
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Keisha Cranford

Lives in PineBluff, AR / A mother of five kids three girls and two boys and A strong black hard young woman Never give up God is Good more…

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