Analysis of Sundowners

Norma Suddard 1940 (Canada)



As day is drawing to a close
in flocks of families they come
to a special tree they chose
to face the setting sun.
While soft breezes gently blow
thru' spindle branches on  high
it gently rocks them to and fro'
as they face an evening sky.
I gaze in wonderment and stare
when the shadows of evening begin
this daily ritual likens to a prayer
a somehow ....sweet Amen.

written by me
Norma J. Suddard


Scheme XXXXABABCXCX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 01110011 1010111 110101 1110101 1101011 11011101 1111101 11010001 10111001 11010010101 01101 1011 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 396
Words 77
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 39

About this poem

As i watched the birds flock to the same tree which faced the setting sun.. Norma J. Suddard norma.suddard@rogers.com

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Written on May 05, 2018

Submitted by norma.suddard on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Norma Suddard

Previously wrote tons of poems. This is only one of so many poems that I couldn't stop writing. I would just imagine in my mind about something or see a piece of broken shard and out came a poem. I have so many, many poems and stories in my books --several binders of poetry, stories and thoughts. I have over 2 large binders of poetry and more than 8 binders on stories I have written. I just see something or think about something and out comes a poem or story. I have also done Ancestry since 2004. My binders take up hugh shelves on both stories and poems. I am in about 10 books of poetry alone never mind the stories. I love to write. Most of my poems are rhymes but there are others that tell a story. Norma J. Suddard more…

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