Analysis of Slaves



What a waste we are
calm collected and rounded
herded as sheep by dogs

eat from the bowl
drink from the cup

lead into oblivious bliss
our fortunes are all ready told
where our no is not acknowledged

eat from the bowl
drink from the cup

told of wrongs by another
fed all lies our weekly supper
made to believe in what?

Eat from the bowl
drink from the cup


Scheme xxx AB xxx AB ccx AB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 10111 1010010 101111 1101 1101 10101001 101011101 110111010 1101 1101 1111010 111101010 110101 1101 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 343
Words 70
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 3, 2, 3, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 47
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by tommydavey on August 21, 2021

Modified by tommydavey on August 21, 2021

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