Analysis of I wish...

Rasmus Berggren 2002 (Linkoping)



Mother is screaming in horror as my father walked into the house, drunk as horse
I hear father screaming something slurred
I wake up in the morning to the broken glass on the floor
I open the fridge; empty
My stomach is screaming for food
Father is laying on the couch, with his beer belly sticking out through the white t shirt
Fucking asshole
Mother is hiding somewhere, or at work
I have to go to school soon
Escape this house
SON, WAIT ONE FUCKING MINUTE!!
He came with the belt, I knew the next step
Pants on the floor, ass in the air, screams in the silence
Well, if that was true
Then I would have had a justification for this hell
Instead I was cursed with a good childhood without no justification for this hell
Dammit


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOOP
Poetic Form
Metre 10110010111010101111 111010101 111001010101101 1100110 11011011 101101011111010110111 1010 101101111 1111111 0111 1111010 1110111011 1101100110010 11111 1111100010111 0111110110110010111 10
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 713
Words 138
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 579
Words per stanza (avg) 138
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Submitted by Rasmus.berggren on August 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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