Analysis of a mockingbird talk called friendship



we started a mockingbird talk in the morning
some stories are mimicking the nature of other stories,
but some stories are just those flawless bar behind the friendship

we drove that far just to say hi in the evening
some people are welcome to listen and save us a night to reveal those yearning boundaries,
but some people are bound for the sadness I wrote in this longship

we started a mockingbird talk in the morning
and it might be senseless yet the grass is greener to heed what we started


Scheme Abc abc Ax
Poetic Form
Metre 11001010010 110110001011010 111011110101010 111111110010 11011011001101101110100 111011101011011 11001010010 011110101110111110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 488
Words 91
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 50
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 30

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Me and my friend spent our times driving car far away in the middle of a night, and stopped in other friend's place. We talked a lot and move from place to place, just to release our sadness.

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Dian Tinambunan

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