Analysis of Addicted



I wake up and think of you,
I do the dishes and think of you,
I brush my hair and think of you,
I think of you so often this is true.

My addiction in life is your love.
It is like you've been sent from above.
So gentle and kind.
Now a days, your type is so hard to find.

My situation is full of despondent times,
But you lift me up when you can.
With you, I do not have to pretend.

I can be foolish and goofy, but you don't care,
You would be with me anytime and anywhere.
You and me would be an unbreakable team.
You would fill the empty spaces in my heart and in between.

I am addicted to everything that you are.
One day I will make you shine like a star.
You will blush so hard, and I will make you mine.
The only thing we have to wait on is time.

I know it sucks and it really is not okay,
I just want you to know I am here to stay.
I will wait, if you can, please wait for me too.
Then we would never have to be blue.

You are my addiction and I can not get enough.
You are cute, wonderful, brave and tough.
You are all the qualities I have looked in ages for.
You will be in my heart forever more.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 110100111 11110111 1111110111 101001111 111111101 11001 1011111111 10101110101 11111111 111111101 111100101111 1111110010 10111101001 111010100110001 11010110111 1111111101 11111011111 01011111111 11110110111 11111111111 11111111111 111101111 1110100111101 111100101 11101001110101 1110110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,077
Words 237
Sentences 21
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

Feelings from deep inside when you are addicted to someone's love.

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Written on August 03, 2021

Submitted on August 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tori Haku

Wrote many poems since the age of 10. Used to write depression poems but now writes all types of poems to get my feelings out. more…

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