Analysis of Undetected Origin



Suspicions to value,
Leaves a mission abandoned to finish it.
To claim...
An undetected origin.
While assisting to deeper bury,
Proof!
Of a detachment long severed,
From a reality and truth of its existence.

Traitors.
Spineless leechers.
And deceivers known to betray.
Could possibly carrying this gene,
In their DNA.

Although proven to be different,
Is our immune system.
To abuse and treat,
As if a garbage disposal.
Until a doing of an evil done,
Becomes an unrelenting...
Regurgitating experience of a pain.

Felt to feel yet incapable to reveal,
The origin of the symptoms.
Or from where such agony comes.
No one can medically diagnose.
To numb.
Or remove surgically without...
The best health insurance money can buy.
With evidenced approved and certified.

Traitors.
Spineless leechers.
And deceiving creatures known to betray.
Could possibly carry this gene,
In their DNA.

And continued are suspicions to value.
With a kept debating to argue,
Over the effects of mental stress.
Or...
The need for psychologists.
And experts in the field of B.S.
Concluding to excuse the obvious.
That there is nothing to cure a mind,
Fed to feed on denial, fiction and fraud!
With a lieing to self,
Giving support that endorses this sickness!

'Why do people protest,
Against truth?'

'Which people?
Only those wealthy and rich,
Protest against the truth.'

'And the others who protest?
Which category do they fit?'

'They are the ones,
Upset about being lied to over and over...
Again and again.
However...
When their deluded lives are threatened,
That's when they take to the streets.
Claiming their entitlements to lie,
Are being jeopardized by diversity.'

'It's all one big crazy mess.
And...
If any attempt is made to correct it?
The people are prepared to run,
Butt naked through the streets.'

'And what does that solve?'

'Closeted and suppressed,
Sexual preferences.
If ever...
You want to see how fast people forget,
Conflicts, division and diversity to fight?
Get them naked.
Thats what all this nonsense is about!'

'And that is a myth!'

'What?
What is a myth?'

'Need I have to say it?


Scheme abxcdxxe FEghG xixjcxx xkkxilmx FEghG aanxxeoxxxo pq jxq pb xrxrstmd nsbct x pxrxxxl u xu b
Poetic Form
Metre 010110 10100101101 11 1010100 101011010 1 10010110 10100111010 10 101 011101 110010011 0111 11011100 1100110 10101 11010010 0101011101 011010 10100101 11110100101 01001010 11111001 11110001 11 101100001 0110101011 110001010 10 101 0010101101 11001011 0111 00101010110 101010110 100011101 1 0110100 01000111 0101010100 111101101 11110101001 10111 10011010110 11101 011 110 1011001 10101 001011 1100111 1101 0101101110010 01001 10 110101110 1111101 101010011 1101010100 1111101 0 11001111011 01010111 110101 01111 100001 1001000 110 1111111001 010100010011 1110 111110101 01101 1 1101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,004
Words 357
Sentences 57
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 7, 8, 5, 11, 2, 3, 2, 8, 5, 1, 7, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 76
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by lpahtillah on July 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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