Analysis of You

Mischa such 2005 (South)



You see the depths of me
When all I show is the surface
You see the clock ticking in my eyes
As I sit alone in an unmarked corner
You feel the silence on your shoulders
As I sit and stare into the world I call home
You see me colour in the world
With the wandering eyes of my imagination
And watch as i tremble
When the thoughts become too loud
Waiting patiently by my side
Until I break the silence and say
"So what's  your name?"


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLM
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 11111010 110110011 11101010110 110101110 111010101111 1111001 101001110010 011110 1010111 10100111 011101001 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 436
Words 90
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 347
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Written on July 03, 2021

Submitted by mischasuch on July 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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