Analysis of God, where are you?

Velma R Jackson 1950 (Wadesboro)



God, where are You? I need to know
daily I cry to You, but you seem not to hear
I began to wonder if you are near
I seek You daily and call out your name, where are you? I need to know

Yes I know that we reap what we sow, where are You? I need to know
Can I ever hear You again
God oh God when?
Where are You I neeed to know?

Are You under a bushel, if this is so
Where are You? I need to know
Have You gone from me for a reason
am I like a crop , I'll have to wait to the next season

Can I find You in my bed or find You before I'm dead
Lord , You said seek and I would find, Lord please have mercy don't leave me behind
God where are You? I need to know

Your mercy is ever lasting, maybe I'll find you while fasting
are You in the big blue sky or are You in the brisk wind passing by

My answer came right on time,my child I want leave you behind
I'm right beside you don't you know
Jesus loves you so
He gave his life to set you free
Come my child, come to me


Scheme Axxa abba aacc xdA xx daaee
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 101111111111 1011101111 11110011111111111 1111111111111111 11101101 1111 1111111 11100101111 1111111 111111010 11101111110110 11110111110111 111101111111011101 11111111 1101101010111110 11001111110011101 11011111111101 11011111 10111 11111111 111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 941
Words 215
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 2, 5
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

I was at the time I wrote this poem could not feel th presence of God, so I just began to ask the question.

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Written on March 01, 1994

Submitted by velmajackson768 on July 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Velma R Jackson

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