Analysis of Want More?



Need I say I want more
Like that tide raging to the shore
What would I do when I get my more?
Creep further into that shore?
And then I would still want some more
Ever ending is that more

How do I know I got my more?
When I know not what is my more
Gotta stop adding to my chores
That painful hunt for my more
Like that tide raging its same shore
Can I be content with my current more?

Now that I have you as my own shore
I know I can stop looking for more
And try to adapt with my given more
Like that tide fighting it’s only shore
Riding towards it, to get its more
And subsiding in it, when it’s got it’s more

Hope you don’t need too much more
And have found in me your current shore
Hope your more can always be my more
So we can sail the tides of the very same shore
And If you do want much much more
Search within our very shore
You will find here your hidden more


Scheme AAAAAA AAXAAA AAAAAA AAAAAAA
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 11110101 111111111 1100111 01111111 1010111 11111111 11111111 10110111 1101111 11110111 1111011101 111111111 111111011 0110111101 111101101 100111111 00100111111 1111111 011011101 11111111 111101101011 01111111 10110101 11111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 855
Words 185
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 7
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 46

About this poem

We always want more in life in relationships etc One is never content or know when to be content so here this goes for those in search of their more!

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Written on July 17, 2021

Submitted by Maheshw on July 17, 2021

Modified by Maheshw on July 17, 2021

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Mahesh Wadhwani

I always apologize for the length of my text as that’s the best way for me to communicate rather than verbally!! Not a man of many words but still manage to doodle when in mood to write, which is rare!! I am not even sure if what I scribble is poetry or even what form or just words that rhyme!! To me writing is an art, a sign of creativity and a means of expression. I don't really think that anyone can just write without any feelings, without having felt, without having lived, experienced or cherished. Whatever one writes, there is some amount of a persons own feelings and presence or of those around them, indicated in the works. So I am thankful to all the people in my life and those yet to come for having given me life, love, happiness and even pain. At-least I have had the opportunity to feel it , live it and express it, whatever it maybe. Cheers! more…

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