Analysis of Sitting To Admit
Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)
There are times I have to sit and admit,
A doing to question my patriotism.
And the pride I try,
To keep my ethnic heritage...
Of being an African American.
So proud I can be.
I have found myself,
Walking tall and arrogantly...
In a crowd of different and mixed races.
One minute and then the next,
Feeling overwhelmed by this.
In seconds to find my eyes in tears.
Yes.
And...
For no apparent reason,
I could observe to see...
Folks around me,
Acting as ignorant as if being paid...
To display a stupidity.
No where on Earth,
Should be allowed freely done.
Without being harnessed and strapped.
To at least a leash.
Or something that prevents,
Anyone else from believing...
What is happening to occur,
Is not an activity...
Of public entertainment to accept.
As a quality of life.
Getting more to expect.
To then ignore heard to hear,
Outrageous and absurd explanations.
About how the times have changed.
'Are your tears to cry of joy?
Or is there something else on your mind,
You would like to discuss.'
'No!
I will be okay.
Sometimes I feel filled,
With unexplainable happiness.
And there are others times,
I find myself reminiscing when...
Times like these were not,
So abundantly available...
With such a variety,
Of unsolicited or wanted madness.'
'Trust me.
I can understand that.
When my family and I moved here.
A few years ago.
You would not believe,
The money we have saved...
To be entertained like this to get it.
Without a dime to pay.
So...
I do understand your tears.
When I first arrived,
I felt the same way.
Until I realized,
God works in mysterious ways...
To bless us all!'
'I guess you do have a point to make.
And, I will go to think,
About your comments.'
'Do.
I did.
And guess what?'
'Never have I felt better to know,
How blessed I am...
Not to worry about unnecessary expenses.
That God blesses me to get for free!
The experience alone,
Is too costly of a price to pay!'
'Wow!
Thank you.
I never thought of it that way!'
'Do.
I did!
And guess what?'
'The only time I cry now?
Is when I am alone.
Thanking God to be blessed,
To be conscious and aware of it!
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Metre | 1111111001 01011011000 00111 11110100 11011000100 11111 1111 10101000 00111000110 1100101 100111 010111101 1 0 1101010 110111 1011 10110011101 10100100 1111 1101101 01101001 11101 110101 1011010 11100101 1110100 110010101 1010011 101101 1101111 010001010 0110111 1111111 111101111 111101 1 1111 01111 10100100 011101 1110101 11101 101000100 1100100 1010011010 11 11011 111000111 01101 11101 010111 110111111 010111 1 110111 11101 11011 01110 11001001 1111 111110111 011111 01110 1 11 011 101111011 1111 1110010100010 111011111 0010001 111010111 1 11 11011111 1 11 011 0101111 111101 101111 111000111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 2,027 |
Words | 400 |
Sentences | 65 |
Stanzas | 11 |
Stanza Lengths | 13, 20, 3, 10, 15, 3, 3, 6, 3, 3, 4 |
Lines Amount | 83 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 143 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 35 |
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