Analysis of No choice water



No Choice Water

By Dr Badal Pal

Far away in the desert lands
or even closer to hand
many an arid desolation
lurk amongst us constant

No water or water is filthy
no water or it is silty
no choice water for ever
drink or die whatever

This is the lot of thousands
thousands or perhaps even millions.
Who  stops for a moment in contemplation ,
whose thoughts linger in commiseration ?
Only a few perhaps act in salvation.

Thousands of children die for lack of water
or because they have no choice but surrender
and have to drink germs tainted whatever
sun burnt desiccated soils everywhere.

In the brief time it took me to compose this
perhaps hundreds have died without my knowing.
How doomed are they and their desperate parents
with the bleak certainty of their demise so apparent?

The great poet wrote ‘water, water everywhere, nor a drop to drink’.
In these desperate terrains
water is no where ,
never mind a  decent drop even.

Water no choice , either nothing or reeking
or  dirty far away in distant lands
or perhaps closer to hand
curse of thousands and thousands.


Scheme A X BCDE XCAA FXDDD AAAG XHXE XXGX HBCF
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11101 10100101 1101011 10110010 101110 110110110 1101111 1110110 11110 1101110 101011010 1110100010 111001 10010110010 10110111110 10111111010 011111010 111000110 00111111011 01101101110 1111011010 10110011011010 0110110101010111 011001 10111 101010110 10111010110 1101010101 1011011 1110010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,055
Words 189
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Scarcity of precious water and suffering

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Written on March 07, 2021

Submitted by badal.pal on July 15, 2021

Modified on April 04, 2023

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