Analysis of Wormhole



It is like I am free falling through time and space,

but not by choice.  

It is so easy for the mind to create a shortcut back to the  

The wormhole to my personal hell.

That is all I get all day long.

I hate you.  

You are the reason no loves me.

You walking into my room in the middle of the night...

Your tongue going into between my legs.

That rabbit just staring the whole time.

Flashes back to my own personal hell.  

Only thing that seems to numb the pain is by talking about it.  

No one wants to hear.  

Digging that carpet cutter into my arm for the first time.  

Blood just pouring out. It looked like I had had turned on the faucet.  

No one noticing the pain that was pulsing threw my body.  

Here comes the trashing in my head.  

The anger no one cares to see.

The thoughts of driving into that 18-wheeler.

With the anger I hold yet I have so much love to give.

No one seems to want it.

Flashes through my own personal hell it is then.


Scheme X X X A X X B X X C A D X C X B X B X X D X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111101101 1111 1111010110101110 01111001 11111111 111 11010111 11001110010101 1110010111 110110011 1011111001 1011111011110011 11111 101101001111011 1110111111111010 111000111101110 11010011 01011111 0111001110 10101111111111 111111 101111001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,108
Words 206
Sentences 35
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 9

About this poem

Poem about my thoughts.

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Written on July 13, 2021

Submitted on July 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:01 min read
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Keghan Blake

Keghan Blake is a new American poet. She is just trying to accept the glorious mess that she is. more…

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