Analysis of Grief



My child
Still gone
Lord, where were you?
Why is my breath so important
Was his breath not?
Living is now a curse
My shadow now criticizes its light
Empathy from others I consider pain
Hugs are just a constant duty
Why do I awake?
Why does morning care?
And how night pampers me, but my bed resists
Stress is now my companion
Oh how it comforts me during restful nights
My child
Still gone


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 11 1101 11111010 1111 101101 11110011 10011010101 11101010 11101 11101 01110111101 1111010 11110110101 11 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 389
Words 75
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 309
Words per stanza (avg) 75
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Submitted by LaToyaMartin on July 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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