Analysis of Boon or curse
Samjhana 1990 (Kathmandu)
Loving you was my fault
Trusting you was my insanity
Remembering you again is my habit
Writing about is my ointment
First as an acquaintance
Then as a classmate
Later as a friend
Soon as the best friend
Finally as my love
You accomplished a great journey
Years of building faith
Years of nourishing affinity
Years of cherishing each other
Suddenly the wave of betrayal
Abandoning and severing trust
Broken heart and torn apart
Being ignored and misheard
All your lies and excuses
You are happy and satiated
Your new beginning
Your commitment and your new love
Still instigating me sometimes
Eventually with your guilt trip
Hello! I am breathing and dreaming
I am fine
Giving up false hope of you
And your pretense of apology
Ignites fire in me
I wish this fire burning me
Burns you too
Scheme | ABXX XXCCD BXBX XXXXX AEDXX EXFBBBF |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (37%) |
Metre | 101111 101110100 01001011110 10011110 111010 1101 10101 11011 100111 10100110 11101 111000100 11100110 100011010 010001001 1010101 100101 1110010 111001 11010 10100111 1100101 010001111 011110010 111 1011111 010110100 011001 11110101 111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 756 |
Words | 139 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 4, 5, 5, 7 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 108 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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My journey with your memory
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Written on July 09, 2021
Submitted by samjhanas1 on July 09, 2021
Modified by samjhanas1 on July 09, 2021
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