Analysis of Inside A Darkened Room

Alan S Jeeves 1951 (Lancashire)



A darkened room knows no sorrow
No today and no tomorrow;
A darkened room has no sadness
Has no pain, only madness.

A darkened room has no light
Has no moon or starlight bright;
A darkened room has no shine
Has no lustre, yours or mine.

A darkened room has no good
Has no heartbeat, has no blood;
A darkened room has no breath
Has no life but only death.

A darkened room has no style
Has no simper, has no smile;
A darkened room has no grin
Has no easiness within.

A darkened room has no day
No opinion, has no say;
A darkened room has no eve
Has no reason to believe.

A darkened room has no PC
Has no he or has no she;
A darkened room has no view
Has no me and has no you.


Scheme AABB CCDD XXEE FFGG HHII JJKK
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 01011110 1010101 01011110 1111010 0101111 111111 0101111 1110111 0101111 111111 0101111 1111101 0101111 1110111 0101111 11101 0101111 1010111 0101111 1110101 01011111 1111111 0101111 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 650
Words 140
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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Quatrains in six stanzas of a,a,b,b, and so on... from 2009

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Submitted by AlanSJeeves on July 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Alan S Jeeves

Alan S Jeeves is a Lancashire (England) born, Yorkshire based classical poet. more…

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