Analysis of By The Still Water's Edge

Alan S Jeeves 1951 (Lancashire)



I gazed down from the water's side
To see a silver gleam
And standing staring looked and tried
To see beyond the stream.
The clearest water sparkling, pure,
Below me stilled and calm;
Its cooling, soothing, fooling lure,
Seductive in its charm.

I saw a young man peering on
With eyes that conquered all.
But in a moment, he was gone ~
Uncanny, I recall.
Beneath the surface he was there,
A soul of twenty-four,
Then vanished in the swell somewhere
And left me by the shore.

Again, he came when it was staid
And braved another glance.
Yet, had I his acquaintance made
Some long by-go, by chance?
He spoke and told me in a rhyme
He yearned that he was me;
Though musing swept me back in time ~
I longed that I was he.


Scheme ABABCXCX XDXDEFEF GHGHIJIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 110101 01010101 110101 01010101 011101 11010101 010011 11011101 111101 10010111 01011 01010111 011101 1100011 011101 01111111 010101 11110101 111111 11011001 111111 11011101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 718
Words 152
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 184
Words per stanza (avg) 46
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Alan S Jeeves

Alan S Jeeves is a Lancashire (England) born, Yorkshire based classical poet. more…

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