Analysis of A Parallel world



Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world,
Here we can be at our own
Away from harsh real zone
Where people & cold and dry
Where love suffocates, and rudeness is high

Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world,
Here no one will tell us what is right
This is far from all the plights
Morning to start with a gentle kiss
Togetherness forever will be a bliss

Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world,
Who will say here how to smile & talk?
to whom to love , with whom you walk
Who judge us even making love in the eaves
This is our own garden of Adam & eve

Let’s rise together
In love
In our own beautiful parallel world
Vixen sucking life out of her superman
It’s not awful but pleasant here
Real world never understand this
The place of love and eternal bliss


Scheme ABCddee ABCxfff ABCggfx ABCxxff
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 01 0101100101 11111101 011111 110101 11101011 11010 01 0101100101 111111111 1111101 101110101 01000101101 11010 01 0101100101 11111111 11111111 11110101001 11101101101 11010 01 0101100101 10101110100 11101101 1110011 011100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 836
Words 158
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 40

About this poem

Two lovers find it difficult in this world to stay together due to social issue, parent pressure and huge age difference in them and want to create a parallel world

Font size:
 

Written on July 01, 2021

Submitted on July 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

47 sec read
26

Discuss this Balvin poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A Parallel world" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 17 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/104008/a-parallel-world>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    14
    days
    19
    hours
    12
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "A Dream Within A Dream"?
    A Elizabeth Barrett Browning
    B William Blake
    C Edgar Allan Poe
    D Percy Bysshe Shelley