Analysis of Status And Fame



Status to gain it.
And fame to obtain.
Believed easy to receive and get,
Without it to earn or regrets to face.
Are movies made for TV viewers.

This...
Is the reality:

Remaining on a path that has,
Not an exit to escape from mistakes to make.
To eventually be given,
Status to gain it and fame to obtain?
Only a few,
Who know...
What they had to go through to achieve,
Such notoriety.
Are seldom asked,
How they slept.
What they ate.
And how their bills were paid.
If they were not sacrificial street livers.
Driven by visions of never ending success.
Without money to do it.
Just air to breathe.

Yet...
Kept feeding on a dream,
To keep them motivated with incentive.

'And...
What do you think,
Provides incentive that motivates?
What do you think is the main factor?'

'Well...
Main factor. Hmmm.
Speaking for myself.
I have never sought status or fame.
That concept to me is so 'ho-hum'.
Transitory and lame.
However with that to say,
I encourage the young folks of today...
To think of negativity and criticism to get,
As an approval of something they are doing.
Noticeable enough to get it attention.
Only to improve upon,
What has been mentioned...
That gets that attention.
Then work on it until a price for it is offered!'

'Isn't that like being a sell out?'

'I have heard that said,
By those who accuse others...
For putting bucks into their pockets.
Finding shelter to pay for it.
And keeping in a refrigerator...food!
Done to do for talents and gifts they have.

Then there are others.
Identified and qualified to sell their souls.
While out hoping their pretensions,
Addressed to market impressions to make.
Are worthy to disguise,
Their potential to leech!


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111 01101 011010101 0111110111 110111110 1 1010 01010111 111010110111 101000110 1011101101 1001 11 111111101 10100 1101 111 111 011101 1101010110 101101101001 0110111 1111 1 110101 1111001010 0 1111 01010110 111110110 1 1101 1011 111011011 110111111 10001 101111 1010011101 1110100010011 110101101110 100001111010 1010101 11110 111010 1111010111110 101110011 11111 1110110 110101110 10101111 010001 1111100111 11110 0100101111 11101010 0111001011 110101 101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,609
Words 299
Sentences 45
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 16, 3, 4, 15, 1, 6, 6
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted by lpahtillah on June 30, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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