Analysis of Fate
Tabitha J. Bryson 1973 (Indianapolis, Indiana)
I need to die
I desire it so
I want life to be over
I want it to go.
I want these tears to stop
the ache to die down
but how do you dry
the tears of a clown?
I feel a breath
a sigh of relief
but for a shadow in the night
might be a thief.
But what can he steal
what can he take
I have here but nothing
just pain & heartache.
Perhaps it is my soul
he desires to obtain
but I'm sure he wouldn't want
to writhe in my pain.
So what could he want?
Why is he here?
does he not realize
I have no fear?
So I wonder why
he tiptoes through the hall
he needn't try to kill me
I'll willingly take the fall...
But I hear a voice
not that of a man
oh my God, I know that voice
it's the voice of Pam!
Now fear begins to build
my muscles lock
I nervously pray
for time to stop.
I know the pain will be bad
I've felt it before
here she comes
there's a knock at my door.
I hope this will be over
so very soon
I hear the creek of the door
as Pam enters the room.
She has a gun
I listen while she loads
I hope death comes soon
and quickly I go.
I hear her shout
I hear the scream
a sharp stabbing pain
I drift off to dream.
My mind sleeps lazily
my body's in pain
another attempted murder
lost in vain.
She swears revenge
she'll get me yet
but not if I beat her to it
and cause my own death.
So I plot the way
I shall take my life
for anything must be better
than this pain & this strife.
But instead of death
away I ran far
to Los Angeles, California
land of the bizarre.
And here among the weird
is where I feel safe
so long as I avoid the mirrors
I can avoid my fate.
Scheme | ABCB DEAE FGXG XHXH XIJI JXXX AKLK MXMX XXND XOXO CPOX XXPB XQIQ LICI XXXF NRCR FSXS XXXX |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (61%) |
Metre | 1111 101011 1111110 11111 111111 01111 11111 01101 1101 01101 1101001 1101 11111 1111 111110 111 011111 1010101 1111101 11011 11111 1111 11110 1111 11101 11101 1101111 1100101 11101 11101 1111111 10111 110111 1101 11001 1111 1101111 11101 111 101111 1111110 1101 1101101 111001 1101 110111 11111 01011 1101 1101 01101 11111 111100 11001 01001010 101 1101 1111 11111011 01111 11101 11111 1101110 11111 10111 01111 11100010 11001 010101 11111 111101010 110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,488 |
Words | 340 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 18 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 72 |
Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 66 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
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Written on October 16, 2006
Submitted by tabbycat_b on June 13, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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