Analysis of I'd Die Without You
Depression calling again,
The pain seeping into my skin,
When will I be able to breathe,
When will this end,
Where are the pills,
I truly need them.
I’m drowning,
Please grab my hand,
Anxiety holds me still,
While a wave of worries come crashing in,
I want to walk,
But I cannot stand,
These thoughts keep my face,
Stuck to the wet sand.
You say you see me,
But I don’t think you understand.
I don’t think you see,
The black hole I really am.
A weak smile on one side,
While the other stays teary eyes,
I talk to you,
Cause you’re the only happiness in my life,
Don’t leave,
I might die,
Don’t want to put pressure on you,
So I keep that last line inside.
Don't get tired of me,
I need new memories of you,
To redecorate my mind,
Sammy I can’t speak for too long,
Depressions on the other line.
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIBJHKHLHLMNOPQRSPNLPTUV |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0101001 01100111 11111011 1111 1101 11011 110 1111 0100111 1011101100 1111 11101 11111 11011 11111 1111101 11111 0111101 011111 10101101 1111 11010100011 11 111 11111011 11111101 111011 11110011 101011 10111111 01010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 780 |
Words | 156 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 31 |
Lines Amount | 31 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 600 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 156 |
About this poem
It's something I wrote like 2 weeks ago. About my mental health and my hearbreak.
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