Analysis of Heartbroken

Afeez Olugbemiga 1972 (Lagos)



I laid in grief on my sofa
My body trembles like a lily flower
I wept like a baby waiting for the quench of hunger
Who will offer me a shoulder to cry on
I wish i could turn back the hands of time
I wish i could wake up into yesterday
Never to realize today
A day of total delusion
We were inseparable before
A relationship which epitomizes every woman dream
But he vanished like thin air
Never to be felt again
I have the reality to bear alone
I have been jilted
I am heart broken


Scheme ABBCDEEFGHIJKLF
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11011110 1101101010 11101010101110 11101010111 1111110111 1111110110 1011001 01110010 100100001 001010100100101 1110111 1011101 110101101 11110 11110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 467
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 384
Words per stanza (avg) 98

About this poem

i wrote this poem as a reflection of my past relationship

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Submitted by Afeez on June 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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