Analysis of Lady Mary Berkeley



Once, long time ago a Lady of grace and elegance,
her child and spouse in glamorous remembrance.
Chillingham Castle in its prime of residence and tragic,
Lord Grey in spell of love by Mary’s sister Henrietta’s magic.

Heartbroken and in despair with baby girl alone,
took her life and child falling from the tower like a stone.
The Castle already haunted by spirits from the dungeon,
crying female voices and rotten smells very pungent.

In her beautiful dress she walks the dark corridor,
surging in courteous fate for her husband therefore.
A friend of mine and phenomenon fanatic,
invited me to this Chillingham Castle haunt ecstatic.

We arrived at a misty midday, overwhelmed
are those spirits already aware of our intend.
Walking in this majestic place through history,
feeling chased by my own step noise mystery.

I dreamed that night to be with Lady Mary,
holding her porcelain face very wary.
Such a sweet and gorgeous virtuous soul,
slowly turning her veins into color coal.

Waking up, I feel in love with this beauty
wanted to know all her historic duty.
Warned by my friend of ghost camouflage,
nothing more but an emotional mirage.

My mind played all searching possibility,
convinced that my heart will change her debility.
To set her free from the pain of grieve,
giving her soul the deserved peace to receive.

In my vain attempt I wrote a little prayer,
that with God one is never alone, sooth sayer.
Stuck that note behind her portrait in gold,
believing that it has consequences bold.

Many months later I received a letter by courier,
with golden letters looking superior.
Words of gratitude and faith to see,
“I will wait for you my love,
                                                      Lady B”


Scheme AABB CCXX DXBB XXEE EEFF EEGG EEHH XDII DDEXE
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010110100 01010100010 1100111100010 1101111110110 100001110101 10101101010101 010010101101010 1011001011010 0010011101100 100100110101 01110010010 0101111101010 1011010101 11100100111001 100101011100 10111111100 11111111010 10010011010 1010101001 10100101101 10111011110 10111001010 11111110 10111010001 1111100100 011111100100 110110111 10010011101 01101110101 111111001110 1110101001 0101111001 101101010101100 11010100100 11100111 1111111 101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,687
Words 287
Sentences 18
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by Fearlessstars on May 31, 2021

Modified on April 11, 2023

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Robert Rittel

Robert Rittel, born in 1960 in Koblenz, Germany was raised in a St. Franciscan orphanage. As a trained chef I travelled many countries and today I know that it was a search for the deeper meaning of life and its mysterious wonders. In 1996, I came to South Africa, got married and as all reasons create consequences, I met some inspirational people who pointed me to my spiritual inheritance. By studying Astrology it created the passion and love for the ancient knowledge of the Vedas. Vedic Astrology provides a refined understanding of the soul’s purpose and opens the doors of perceptions towards our spiritual and real circumstance. more…

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