Analysis of Daddy I miss you



Daddy. I miss you. Are you still around?
I call for you and hear no sound
I cry from my soul my heart is broke
Feels like my life is up in smoke
Nothings been the same since you went away
I wish I could bring you back to stay
Its been a few months but it feels like ages
Drive by your house I get enraged
I feel like you were stollen from me
I think of your smile, your eyes I no longer see
Pictures around my house remind me of you
Memories of all the hell I put you through
I'd bring you back if I could so I could make it right
If I could change it all now we'd never ever fight
I love you so much dad and miss you a lot
My heart is still scattered in the very spot
I cry for you often at night when I'm alone and awake
I feel like those drs must have made a mistake
Someone took you away from me
And I'm tired so tired of the misery
But I know my kids need me as I needed you
So I'll stand tall and stay strong as that's what you'd want me to do.

I love you Glenn Weldon Jennings Jr.
Love always,
Your baby
Eva Joy Jennings-Blevins.


Scheme AABBCCXXDDEEFFGGHHDDEE XXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111101 11110111 111111111 11111101 1010111101 111111111 11011111110 11111101 111101011 111111111101 10011101111 10011011111 1111111111111 1111111110101 11111101101 11111000101 111110111101001 11111111001 1110111 011011010100 111111111101 111101111111111 111110101 11 110 1011010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,013
Words 223
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 22, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 399
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on May 30, 2021

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Eva Joy Blevins

Eva Blevins was born to Victoria Kathleen Weehunt and Glenn Weldon Jennings Jr. On June 27, 1988 in Paramount California. The youngest of 14 children, Eva often found herself singing or writing to clear her mind of any feelings. Poetry helped her conquer fears of tests, depression, anxiety, and even the joys and sadness of love. Eva is a mother of two children Kai Weldon Jennings and Lyric Fame Blevins of whom are her world. more…

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