Analysis of Demons Haunt



Demons haunt my darkened brain
Taunting me with a liquid pain
Bulging veins that draw me closer
A wicked shot, my heart grows colder

Needle and spoon--my ball and chain
A flicker of fire fans the flame
Black as night and thick as tar
My blood's on fire with a liquid scar

The demons come, but rarely leave
I tried to run, but the needle cleaves
It's voices I hear, the demons call
I ascend to heaven, but quickly fall

To hell and back, a forceful urge
I cannot cleanse, nor can I purge
A coursing river through my veins
Fast and fleeting, the urge remains

The tracks that mark a lonely trail
A gateway to my living hell
It tears into my supple flesh
And takes away my living breath

A jarring smack into my brain
Of empty hopes, sorrow and pain
But soon to shake off this mortal coil
And find my rest deep in the soil

©2015 Brian Duffin


Scheme AABB AXCC XXDD EEFF XXXX AAGG X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101 10110101 10111110 010111110 10011101 010110101 1110111 1111010101 01011101 111110101 110110101 1011101101 11010101 11011111 01010111 10100101 01110101 0111101 11011101 01011101 01010111 11011001 111111101 01111001 1010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 812
Words 162
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by brian.duffin on May 30, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brian Duffin

After taking an English class with a focus on literature and poetry, Brian Duffin discovered a love for words and a passion for poetry. Brian's poems reflect his love of nature, while also sharing the raw human emotions and events that fill and shape his life. more…

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