Analysis of Horses

Edwin Muir 1887 (Orkney) – 1959 (Cambridge)



Those lumbering horses in the steady plough,
On the bare field - I wonder, why, just now,
They seemed terrible, so wild and strange,
Like magic power on the stony grange.

Perhaps some childish hour has come again,
When I watched fearful, through the blackening rain,
Their hooves like pistons in an ancient mill
Move up and down, yet seem as standing still.

Their conquering hooves which trod the stubble down
Were ritual that turned the field to brown,
And their great hulks were seraphims of gold,
Or mute ecstatic monsters on the mould.

And oh the rapture, when, one furrow done,
They marched broad-breasted to the sinking sun!
The light flowed off their bossy sides in flakes;
The furrows rolled behind like struggling snakes.

But when at dusk with steaming nostrils home
They came, they seemed gigantic in the gloam,
And warm and glowing with mysterious fire
That lit their smouldering bodies in the mire.

Their eyes as brilliant and as wide as night
Gleamed with a cruel apocalyptic light,
Their manes the leaping ire of the wind
Lifted with rage invisible and blind.

Ah, now it fades! It fades! And I must pine
Again for the dread country crystalline,
Where the blank field and the still-standing tree
Were bright and fearful presences to me.


Scheme AABB XXCC DDEE FFGG HHXX IIJJ KKLL
Poetic Form Quatrain  (71%)
Metre 11001000101 1011110111 111001101 1101010101 01110101101 11110101001 1111001101 1101111101 11001110101 0100110111 01110111 1101010101 0101011101 1111010101 0111110101 0110111001 1111110101 1111010001 010101010010 111110001 1111001111 1101000101 110101101 1011010001 1111110111 011011010 1011001101 0101010011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,230
Words 218
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 30, 2023

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Edwin Muir

Edwin Muir was an Orcadian poet, novelist and translator, born on a farm in Deerness on the Orkney Islands. He is remembered for his deeply felt and vivid poetry in plain language with few stylistic preoccupations. more…

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