Analysis of The Marathon

Charles Gordon Fawcett 1945 (Mission British Columbia)



I came upon a sunlit dream
          Reality of time .
Moving in the shadows
Of a place I cannot find .

I came upon a prophet
Of the future space to be .
A member of the stock exchange
A banking man to see .

His stocks and bonds and dividends
       Weigh heavy on his mind.
As he plods along the city streets
     A place where he might hide .

From the taxes and the people
From  the truth he cannot see .
He's running through the city streets .
           A man without a dream.

A crooked man a blind man ,
    A peace he cannot find .
For the stocks and bonds and dividends
             Weigh heavy on his mind .


Scheme axxb xcxc dBex xcea xbdB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 1101011 1011 10001 1011101 1101010 1010111 01010101 010111 1101010 110111 111010101 011111 10100010 1011101 11010101 010101 0101011 011101 10101010 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 601
Words 111
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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