Analysis of Lonely Child

Mitch Hagen 1992 (Vancouver)



It's desolate in this lonely life,
It's dark where there is light.
Trying to find someone to love,
But just can't win the fight.
Listen to my soul for truth,
Get deafened by people's blatant lies.
I've lost myself amid my shame,
Can't someone just hear my cries.
Just me myself and only I,
Turn to rust, wait to die.
I pray one day someone See's,
This lonely child that hides inside.


Scheme ABCBDEFEGGEH
Poetic Form
Metre 110001101 111111 1011111 111101 1011111 11110101 1110111 111111 1110101 111111 111111 11011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 372
Words 72
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 292
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted by MitchTheFridge on May 25, 2021

Modified on April 18, 2023

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Mitch Hagen

The poems I write reflect my life and my struggles. I put a lot of thought into each poem and each and every one was written from deep inside my soul. I hope you enjoy them, if you do or you don't please don't hesitate to leave some feedback. Born in Vancouver BC Canada, raised in Prince George BC Canada, currently living in Edmonton AB Canada. more…

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