Analysis of Missing You

Shaleigh Meiners 1991 (United States)



I miss the way you used to smile,
And the way you looked at me.
How you used to be so humble,
How you made me feel so free.

I miss the long nights,
I miss the summer days.
I miss the tingling feeling,
That crept across my skin from the sun rays.

I miss the happiness you brought me,
The joy of every little thing.
I miss the way it used to feel,
Knowing, no two days would ever be the same.

Out of all the things I miss,
The thing that I will never again be...
Is that your beautiful self...
Is really, the younger me.


Scheme XAXA XBCB ACXX XAXA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 11011111 0011111 11111110 1111111 11011 110101 11010010 1101111011 110100111 011100101 11011111 10111110101 1110111 0111110011 1111001 1100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 504
Words 108
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Shaleigh Meiners

Just a small town woman from Wisconsin, Who wrote some poems in High school and after about problems in life. more…

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