Analysis of I'm still here



Sometimes my thoughts get heavy
my feelings get numb
and my heart is unsteady
tears stat running from my eyes.

I put on my tennis shoes
 believe I can hide but I can't
So I slow down regain my breath
and finish this race

Listening to my footsteps as I take each step
The rhythm of my breath
has synchronized into nothing
but I have a still ness in my head

I'm light as a feather
as I let myself fly
this world is a blur but
tonight I am still alive.


Scheme AXAX XXBX XBXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0111110 11011 0111010 1110111 1111101 01111111 11110111 01011 10011111111 010111 1100110 111011011 111010 11111 111011 0111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 435
Words 92
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by candyville on May 20, 2021

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Heather Magone

I'm a Phloet. A philosopher and Poet. I am also an Artist and Stencil Artist. My company name is LayZ. My website is http://www.layzart.com Check out a dialogue with God at http://ifgodanswered.blogspot.com/ Starting writing 2 weeks ago...something in the air inspired me probably the rain and the fact the most things leave you bored and unsatisfied. Writings fun though. I love to read create and dreamI love Phloetry! Do you? Phloetry are folk poems. They describe what's going on today! more…

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