Analysis of Be update. ( lyrical poem ).

Brijmohansajal 1946 (India)



Be update, and keep, up to date
Be on active, and act, do not wait,
Be update.........

The time is running, very fast,
Every thing is happening at the cost,
So you, do your best, to feel great,
Be update...........

The life is a game, for the strong,
That may be right, may be wrong,
So you, get to that, to have taste,
Be update............

Produce, a flame in your heart,
Which make you best, in the world,
So you, be the one, of that state,
Be update...............


Scheme aaA xxaA bbxA xxaA
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 10101111 111001111 101 01110101 10011100101 11111111 101 01101101 1111111 11111111 101 0101011 1111001 11101111 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 454
Words 88
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by brijmohan_p on May 17, 2021

Modified on April 23, 2023

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Brijmohansajal

For writing this poem, I have got inspiration from manner less people, Though I can't teach them, but decided to write in this subject. First half was written and the rest half took long time. I am happy to do something in this way and show a path this way. more…

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