Analysis of A bloody Valentine day!

GIDRAF MWANGI 1992 (Murang'a)



I woke up with a bloody yawn
That turned to a bloody groan
Blinking my bloody sleepy eyes
Due to the bloody sun rays
From the bloody open window

Checking out the bloody phenomenon
I met the sight of a bloody curtain
A bloody vase with a rose
Of course bloody but sweet
Tempting a bloody bee outside

How could I have bloody missed to see
That the top color had bloody changed
From dark blue to reflecting blood
Oh! The bloody bloodies inside
Including my bloody panty!

Hop into my bloody slippers
Off into the washroom bloody next door
Only to terminate with a bloody tissue
Due to my bloody cholera
But why severe on a bloody morning?

My wife totters in blood stupidly
Been drinking the bloody wines
Applying the bloody lipsticks
Looking bloody ‘nyama choma’
Then she bloody tells me!

Oh! It’s a bloody valentine day!

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme XXXXX XXXXA BXXAB XXXCX BXXCB X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 1110101 10110101 1101011 10101010 101010010 1101101010 0101101 111011 10010111 111110111 101101101 11110101 1010101 01011010 10111010 101011011 1011010101 11110100 1101101010 11101100 1100101 0100101 1010110 111011 11010101 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 821
Words 152
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 1, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by GIDRAF on May 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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