talygarza
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Although is quite terrible the spectator fate, the pawn metaphor is poetically very attractive, getting an image you put on here.

The cohesion on the description of affective liaisons gives the poem a message of consideration with others feelings very needed in toughs moments, often we take intimacy as granted, and for me is a social construction. more »

Congrats, moving meditation, just I’m reading a book related with environmental change so this poem projects all this stuff related with climate issues, social media and how that shape our lives.

Nice comparative between old and young ages, poetic humorous, accepting the facts.

This poem approach mental health issues with simplicity and realism.

Poem expressing the human longing to make a living without restrictions, is a good attitude to better life.

I love poppies too, I enjoy a lot seeing them everywhere, and products related with them. This poem is a very heartwarming expression.

“Little log cabins with their candles glowing”, great sentence on here, of course trees are excellent metaphors.

The poetic narrative is made from coherent description of cosmical phenomena, adding a feeling of acceptance with man position in the universe.

Keep focused in present rewards, well poem, underline a mindfulness vision.

thank you, the title deceived means that the appearance of things can’t undermine your true value, that’s the message on the last stanza. Cheers.

I see, of course is terrible, however poetry helps with optimism. Good luck!!!

Touching piece describing the progress of a person that is loved, beliefs and divine glimpses add cohesion to close well and get attention.

Thanks for your generous appreciation of my poem. Greetings!!!!