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  October 2021     2 years ago

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Unrequited Love Poem

stranger, listen: do you hear me crawling? do you see the translucent paleness of my being, that lingers within this naked earth, made threadbare and...

by Jack Otterberg

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Unrequited Love Poem From Purgatory

stranger, listen: do you hear me crawling? do you see the translucent paleness of my being, that lingers within this naked earth, made threadbare and...

by Jack Otterberg

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Terrible Roses

I remember the way I dipped my feet into the cold pool; timidly, like eggshells were pinned beneath my toes. how your eyes poured over— when I said I wanted to die; your cheeks trembling, teardrops slithered like the dark part of a star’s...

by Jack Otterberg

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Indigo Room

your eyes. the loved ones are here.
inside you, a wind is dying. a four-leafed clover broken at the edge. a pallid face resting on a pallid bed in an indigo room. please hear yourself: God doesn’t forgive this. He doesn’t want the sandals...

by Jack Otterberg

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