My Deep Desire



I don't wanna be with you,
I can't live without you.

What made me this controversy?
I don't understand my misery.

When your heart call me in you,
I wanna all the time see you.

I don't know what made me so insane,
I only want to feel you.

I fall in love, a past away,
Expressing me, was a delay.

Finally when I proposed you,
I was swear to care you.

I dive in the swear sea,
Keeping you alive from the deep.

I had full faith on you, but I don't know,
why, I hide you from me.

 IT MIGHT BE THE SAME REASON

I don't wanna be with you,
I can't live without you.
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Submitted on August 09, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA bb aa xa cc aa bx xb x AA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 538
Words 117
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2

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