Is it over yet



She says she doesnt belive and you try to show her,
He says he wants it different but she cant feel it,

one by one the peices fall and they try to catch them
but what are your trying for really???

They cry together but all alone,
Different worlds and feelings all unknown

She's a fallen angel in a painful world
All of her own doing, reasoning and thinking

He sits alone at night,
cant seem to stop his actons, thoughts or feelings

They sleep side by side but not together,
and both know the world is crumbling forever...

Where is that feeling your longing for...
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XX BB XX XX AA X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 551
Words 106
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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