Forming Feelings



When feelings of new leave lovers' of old
Feelings form for secrets told
Loving lust and fine gold
Was what I thought

A heart that you have silently caught
Knowing my love cannot be bought
Tell me, tell me what you got
Where it started from the heart

Tell me where did this start
Feelings valuable of this love chart
Why if only I could be your heart
But silently, I didn't think you would care

Looking at me and brushing aside my hair
Loving me forever so, you swear
Leaving me you could be able to never bear
But beware of me, for I tend to deny

To speak so little I can only label words of lie
Thinking this could be our last goodbye
I ask over and over wondering why
The argument the same, your choice never change

Say you won't, but will leave isn't strange
To you, but to me is simply stretching range
Whispering in mind that you would change
But words will hurt and tears will run

Sadly I cannot change what was done
Tears will fall faster than a trigger of a gun
Your words make my heart weigh as if a ton
You look at the world so light, I didn't think you hear

but now I see your loving Tears
The foggy mist now simply clears
My voice now I know you hear
And until the end of time this will be true
My dear...
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Submitted on April 14, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AAAX BBBC CCCD DDDE EEEF FFFG GGGH XXHXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,186
Words 244
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

Syrelia

I believe that there is a time for everything and some things can be expressed through poetry I come from a different family and things are different everywhere. I believe poems can be gateways into the mind, what we cannot say but wish to say it anyway so badly and so words change but the meaning will forever stay the same.I write as my hands allow me, word after word. Ink following the shadows of my paper begging me silently to write more.These are my poems. more…

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