Daydreaming On A Vacation



On the lake as I sit free.
On a vacation I would be.
I see the trees and I hear the birds.
I see the deer that run in herds.
On a mountaintop far away, I see a ram,
and he wants to play. He dances, he jumps
and knocks rocks loose with all the fun.
But the ram is unaware of the danger that leers.
I see a cougar coming near. Luckily, the ram veers.
I am glad and filled with glee.
And I see a butterfly land on a tree.
With its bright colors and large wings,
if only I could be such a thing.
I would fly away, with no care in sight,
and carry on all through the night.
I fly around and visit the flowers.
What a gorgeous day. I hope it doesn't shower.
I stop dreaming, and awake I be,
and there I am, for all to see.
Back on the lake, until the next dream I dream.
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on April 03, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
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Words 164
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Shawn Daniels

I am a man of various skills and sick and twisted minds.....yes minds... 800 dimensions I see things in and I like to become things............ only a portion of what I write is about personal experiences. The other portion is my mind inventing things up.. I may look at something and become that object and describe to you how it feels???? If you dare come enter the twisted and intellectual mind of me ...A.K.A " SuperShawn" I guarantee you once you learn how I see things you will too....Scary thought HUH!!!!!! muahhahahahahaah I do write A lot of haiku as well there short and to the point so dont judge me unless you know what haiku is! follow me on Twitter more…

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