Young Minds
You called me a hazard
when all I did I meant
I was like quicksand
with the ideas that I dreamt.
You put me up on your caution list
and had to breath
you put cement around me
keeping me away from my depths.
I had my mind like roots deep
but you kept them shut
Keeping them away from sunlight
and the water I should get.
Then you ripped me from the Earth
bringing me up to the surface
where the specs of sunlight,
Burnt me down.
It rained and rained,
I was at mercy that time
but it rained far too heavily
And I became a cloud.
I was happy,
My mind filled with observation
about to fall on the ground
but you never liked it
and trapped me again in a bucket
making me drown.
Before the ideas
reached the tongue of those
you ripped them away
throwing it in the junk.
Cause you fear,
All those young minds....
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Submitted by chehak0611 on March 06, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 774 |
Words | 162 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6, 6 |
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